Post by lilywilde on Nov 22, 2016 23:32:02 GMT -6
Requesting revision(s) for: Lily
Nature of revision: Has been corrupted by the void yo, also some minor 'fruits of her labors' revisions
Link to app: twbtd.boards.net/thread/411/wilde-lily
Revisions to be reviewed: Aura section changed from
Her aura is a blinding white light, which contrasts with her dark features to great effect. People who are bathed in it's light tend to feel a little more at ease. She can use her aura to increase the effectiveness of her claws which she uses to attack her enemies, or she can use it to harden her skin and prevent damage.
To
Her aura is a murky grey fog which hangs over her like a cloud. All who are touched by it's light are downcast, and dejected. They feel as if all hope has died, and only despair remains. It's presence is one that brings pain and suffering. The void has corrupted her down to the very soul, and she wears this grey aura like a noose.
Semblance is changed from
LIGHT SPEED - 10 Aura
Her semblance is a standard speed semblance. When employed, time almost seems to stand still for her as she moves. To an outsider, all that they can see of her while she employs her semblance is the white glowing streaks of light that mark the path she took. Most commonly she uses this ability to land a few attacks against her opponent. Even fighters with amazing reaction times or similar levels of speed might have a difficult time blocking her when she's moving this quickly, but she has difficulty controlling her turning when she's using her semblance. Mach 2 seems to be her top speed when moving with her semblance, but it'd difficult to maintain this speed for too long without being drained by it.
To
LIGHT SPEED - 10 Aura per second
Her semblance is a standard speed semblance. When employed, time almost seems to stand still for her as she moves. To an outsider, all that they can see of her while she employs her semblance is the grey glowing streaks of light that mark the path she took. Most commonly she uses this ability to land a few attacks against her opponent. Even fighters with amazing reaction times or similar levels of speed might have a difficult time blocking her when she's moving this quickly, but she has difficulty controlling her turning when she's using her semblance. Mach 4 seems to be her top speed when moving with her semblance, the power she gained from the void doubling her previous speed. Her mental awareness of her surroundings is adjusted to match the increased speed, and can be used without employing the speed when a situation needs to be analyzed properly. She also incorporates her defensive aura into her semblance, allowing her to move without taking damage from the friction and any surfaces she may impact while moving at such ludicrous speeds.
ACCELERATED SIDESTEP - 5 Aura
Her constant training since joining Vytal has allowed her a modicum of increased control over her movements while employing her semblance. She can now use her aura in smaller bursts to conserve energy. She can dodge up to twenty feet in a direction with a quick hop to the side.
Revisions approved/rejected by: Pending.
Nature of revision: Has been corrupted by the void yo, also some minor 'fruits of her labors' revisions
Link to app: twbtd.boards.net/thread/411/wilde-lily
Revisions to be reviewed: Aura section changed from
Her aura is a blinding white light, which contrasts with her dark features to great effect. People who are bathed in it's light tend to feel a little more at ease. She can use her aura to increase the effectiveness of her claws which she uses to attack her enemies, or she can use it to harden her skin and prevent damage.
To
Her aura is a murky grey fog which hangs over her like a cloud. All who are touched by it's light are downcast, and dejected. They feel as if all hope has died, and only despair remains. It's presence is one that brings pain and suffering. The void has corrupted her down to the very soul, and she wears this grey aura like a noose.
Semblance is changed from
LIGHT SPEED - 10 Aura
Her semblance is a standard speed semblance. When employed, time almost seems to stand still for her as she moves. To an outsider, all that they can see of her while she employs her semblance is the white glowing streaks of light that mark the path she took. Most commonly she uses this ability to land a few attacks against her opponent. Even fighters with amazing reaction times or similar levels of speed might have a difficult time blocking her when she's moving this quickly, but she has difficulty controlling her turning when she's using her semblance. Mach 2 seems to be her top speed when moving with her semblance, but it'd difficult to maintain this speed for too long without being drained by it.
To
LIGHT SPEED - 10 Aura per second
Her semblance is a standard speed semblance. When employed, time almost seems to stand still for her as she moves. To an outsider, all that they can see of her while she employs her semblance is the grey glowing streaks of light that mark the path she took. Most commonly she uses this ability to land a few attacks against her opponent. Even fighters with amazing reaction times or similar levels of speed might have a difficult time blocking her when she's moving this quickly, but she has difficulty controlling her turning when she's using her semblance. Mach 4 seems to be her top speed when moving with her semblance, the power she gained from the void doubling her previous speed. Her mental awareness of her surroundings is adjusted to match the increased speed, and can be used without employing the speed when a situation needs to be analyzed properly. She also incorporates her defensive aura into her semblance, allowing her to move without taking damage from the friction and any surfaces she may impact while moving at such ludicrous speeds.
ACCELERATED SIDESTEP - 5 Aura
Her constant training since joining Vytal has allowed her a modicum of increased control over her movements while employing her semblance. She can now use her aura in smaller bursts to conserve energy. She can dodge up to twenty feet in a direction with a quick hop to the side.
Revisions approved/rejected by: Pending.
